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Great job on setting up the abstract class and the inheritance structure! However, a few changes are needed before this can be approved.
The main issue is in MainApp.java, where the program will crash with an ArrayIndexOutOfBoundsException. The machines array is initialized with a size of 2, but you are adding three machines to it. Please make sure the array is large enough to hold all the machine instances.
Additionally, please address the following:
- There is a typo in the
Buldozerclass name; it should beBulldozeras required by the task. - The output messages in the
doWork()andstopWork()methods for all machine classes are not informative enough [CHECKLIST ITEM #2]. They should clearly state that the machine has started or stopped its work, for example,Truck started its work.
Fixing these points will get your solution ready for approval. Keep up the great work!
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This violates checklist item #2: 'Write informative messages in methods.' The current message is a bit too literal. A more descriptive message, such as 'Excavator started its work,' would better align with the requirements.
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This violates checklist item #2: 'Write informative messages in methods.' Similar to the doWork() method, this message could be more informative. For example, 'Excavator stopped its work.' would be more descriptive.
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You have initialized an array with a size of 2, but you are attempting to add three elements to it. This will cause an ArrayIndexOutOfBoundsException when the program tries to execute line 8, as the valid indices are 0 and 1. The array size should be large enough to hold all the machines.
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There's a typo in the class name. According to the task description, it should be Bulldozer.
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This violates checklist item #2: 'Write informative messages in methods'. The message should be more descriptive, for example: "Bulldozer started its work".
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This violates checklist item #2: 'Write informative messages in methods'. The message should be more descriptive, for example: "Bulldozer stopped working".
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This violates checklist item #2: 'Write informative messages in methods'. The message should be more descriptive, like 'Truck started its work', to clearly indicate the action being performed.
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This violates checklist item #2: 'Write informative messages in methods'. Similar to the doWork method, this message should be more informative, for example: 'Truck stopped working'.
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Excellent progress on this task! You've successfully fixed the previous issues with the array size and the output messages. However, changes are needed because a core requirement is not yet met. The class for the bulldozer is consistently misspelled as Buldozer instead of Bulldozer. To fix this, please: 1. Rename the file Buldozer.java to Bulldozer.java. 2. Update the class declaration inside the file to public class Bulldozer. 3. Correct the object creation in MainApp.java to new Bulldozer(). 4. Update the strings in the doWork() and stopWork() methods to use "Bulldozer". Once you make this correction, your solution will be ready for approval. You're very close!
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The class name is still misspelled. According to the task requirements, it should be Bulldozer. Please also update the filename and the output messages on lines 6 and 11 to reflect this change.
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| Machine[] machines = new Machine[3]; | ||
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The class name Buldozer has a typo. According to the task requirements, it should be Bulldozer.
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Excellent work on this submission! You've successfully fixed the critical Bulldozer spelling issue, and the program now works perfectly according to the requirements.
I am approving this solution to help you progress, but please note a minor code style issue for future reference. In src/main/java/core/basesyntax/Machine.java, there are a couple of redundant empty lines after the class declaration and between method declarations. It's a good practice to keep the code clean and avoid unnecessary blank lines [CHECKLIST ITEM #1].
Overall, this is a very solid implementation. Keep up the great work!
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This empty line after the class declaration is redundant. This violates checklist item #1: 'Please don't add redundant empty lines to your code.'
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This empty line between the method declarations is also redundant. This violates checklist item #1: 'Please don't add redundant empty lines to your code.'
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